help on narrative poem?
this is what i have so far and it's really bad, it has to be atleast 3 or 4 stanzas long do you have iedas. it could ba a totally new oem . im just desperate.
poem:
Walking down the street
An old man came toward me
Holding a can of meat
I wondered who he wanted to see
The man came in
Asking if he could see my room
And then he started to grin
Suddenly, I heard big boom.
I came crashing to my place
The man was gone
And so was my $1000 vase
Which happened to have a swan
My parents will soon get a fright
On best behavior shall I stay
Or we will soon have a fight
And I will have much to say
she stood on the brige at midnight
her lips were all a quiver
she gave a cough, her leg fell off
and floated down the river
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