April 21st, 2010

are these lyrics i wrote any any good?(life or death situation!!!!)?

this song is called brain dead its a punk rock song

fallen into a state of disillusion
willing to believe... everything is an illusion
too thick for gratitude
ignorant of my attitude
i know im going nowhere
so im dragging you slong for the ride
its far too late for you to hide

blank faced
mouth agape
at my commands
are you brain dead
or retarded
listen to what i just said

insignificant beyond compare
better look away from my piercing stare
acting deaf to my comments
it's not smart to fake contentment

blank faced
mouth agape
at my commands
are you brain dead
or retarded
listen to what i just said

dont lie
not another ruse from you
all i want
all ive ever want
is the truth
or is that too much
am i not asking enough
am i acting too rash
am i holding on too hard to the past

thanks for reading
please rate 1 to 10
im 14 btw
and i now the word retarded my be offensive
but u need to remeber this is a PUNK rock son

most well written thing I've read in a VERY long time.

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